SHCG: What fun! Luv the funky layout and title. Your layout is a little jumbled but it works. My only suggestion would be to extend the brown pattern paper with the scroll edge to the bottom (so a little stripe peeks out). It reminds me of a book. Then move your title down ever so slightly (so it looks like the title on the book).
SHCG - What the... I typed out a whole comment for this days ago & now it's gone! Ah well, strange things happen here at 4AM. Anyway, looks like you all had a blast this evening - great pics! Very innovative using your cutout pic for the "a" in the title. I feel the button less for the "o" it took me a while to get without your description. I feel a round orange button (keeping the couture vibe), or just a regular "o", would work better. I like your color scheme & pp selection. Dig the idea of distressing the chain & Jesse suggestion of adding another in the top right. The skeleton is cool but it makes me crave more orange bone-themed embellies on the left, maybe just scatter a few loose bones around that side? You know I love them multiple pics. Marvelous response to your BWC!
shcg - great submission for your BWC. Your use of elements within your title is a winner. Distressing of the chain will be beneficial. I like the cut out skeleton on the second page, but I'm not quite feeling it WITH the bracket shape of the background. For some reason, I feel like those shapes are competing with one another. I agree with Jesse's idea of a secondary link of chain in the top right of page 2 to draw your eye across the page. I think that will complete the visual triangle better. Add in your journaling and this will be a fabulous page!
SHCG: I really like this so far! I think you've done a nice job laying it out, and I love the picture of you used instead of an A (clever title, BTW). I'm not sure how I feel about adding another chain to the facing page; it would be a nice joining touch, but I'm not sure it's really needed. I'd maybe see what you think of one in the upper right corner of the facing page, that would make a nice diagonal across the two pages. Good job so far, this is very fun and I can't wait to hear the story behind the pictures!
This is for the 2010 SCHG BWC #23 to simply scrap a Halloween lo. Nothing is adhered. I am requesting critiques and suggestions only, at this time please, for this work in progress. I used a pic of myself in place of the A in Haunt, and a square leather button in place of o in couture. I plan on dirtying up the chain link at the bottom to make it look rustier which is why I chose this solid cs color as the base tone, but I need a few tries at it first. When making suggestions please consider its facing page in this two-page spread. Color choices and placement are my main concerns, and if visual triangles are evident across the spread. Thank you.
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