SHCG: Great idea to create something from a poem you wrote. I also have to say that I love your poem. Your elements and color choices for this page are fabulous. Those three D stars are super cool and so are the ticket stub looking things. I agree with a few of the others about putting blue circles in that blank space above "little". Wondeful page!!
SHCG: What a great two page spread. LUV how the title went across two pages but the words on each page can still stand by themselves. The photos have great movment and you complimented that with the exploding stars and butst around the 81.
SHCG - I love that you created this from something you wrote - that poem's awesome & captures the feel of these cute photos well. Nice how you set forth the superhero-y feel w/ the color choices & cool images. I like the gradation of color in the "superheros" letters. I ditto Brenda's suggestion of filling in the negative space above "little" w/ the blue circles from the left - that would fill that space while not taking focus from where it should be, on all the other elements & those fantastic pics! Super work.
SHCG: Great superhero feel to the lo! I love the poem and I'm glad that you used it here-so perfect! I love the colors, love the way you did the title and the stars and everything else!Great lo!
SHCG: I love how you personalized this with your own poem. You did a great job capturing the comic book, superpower feel. I like how the first part of the title is in lowercase and that you shadowed the letters. My only suggestion is to fill up some of the negative space above little to connect the two photos. Maybe add more of those blue circles that are on the left page. You guys were so cute, and this is such a sweet memory for you to cherish. TFS!
shcg: this is very cool Brian. I like the bright embellishments to go with your superhero theme, but I'm not quite sure... is the "81" for the year or ??
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