Pure, Sweet Baby

so sweet

May 16, 2007

Another way to add more color would be to continue the doodling up the lefthand side. Fill it in more, like patterened paper.

March 30, 2007

CHT: I agree with bee about using a template or something to "contain" your text. Otherwise, I like the the color as is.

March 26, 2007

I like this page. The picture is sweet and well placed. The frame is very nice. The rub on is nice and the embellishments are a nice touch. Of you don't love it, it may be the weight of the journaling. Try adding something to the top - a title of sorts to balance it. Or slide the pic to toward the bottom left (not all the way) and journal down the right side?

March 16, 2007

CHT: Since your page is white and the pic B&W, I feel you are missing some color (ar al least something bold) to draw the attention to the page (I wonder what the page would look like on a black background and with white journaling??). I like the journaling at the bottom, but the lines of the text are a bit too long (i'd line up the text with the mat YKWIM??).