I'm so resisting the urge to suggest that you put a baseball and bat stickers on the page, but if you feel like the space between those bottom two pictures could use them, well, who am I to stop you? I'd also like to see a white shadow around the chippie letters. I'm glad you made it over to the dark side of multi-photo scrapping. Welcome, my pretty. We have cookies... heh, heh, heh.
Christy, I'm going to put the same comments on each side here because I'm seeing this as the 2 sides making up the whole thing. I LOVE that you used so many photos on this! Great how the left side depicts how into it Joey is in the beginning, then the left side shows how that changes, nice contrast with the different photos & colors schemes. I like the writing on the photo too. Now, I really wish the caption on the right side was a full sentence, because on the left side you start a sentence "He is so into the game..." but right side has just a fragment; I'd just want it to be something like "the rest of the game is a whole other story!" just a complete thought there. I like the photo mattes on the left & the cool doodling around the photos on the right but I wish it was consistent on both sides (green matting on the right & doodling added to the left). I think you can also add more of the doodles all around, just 'cause they're so fun & playful! Finally I can see adding a little more visual emphasis on the title - maybe matting or shadowing in the light orange, with some doodling? Overall, I love how you depict the story here! Very cute & fun!
I am extremely disappointed in the scan but I could not get it to do any better. The squares are square!
I liked completing this LO because it has been a goal of mine to do more multi photo lo's and fewer one photo because i feel that the multi photos tell more of a story.
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