Triathlon (pp. 3-4)

SHCG - Mmm, you know I love me some actual memorabilia! I love all the ephemera here & the bib replica. Also love that shoe print. Cool how you kept the color scheme but changed the shapes, & kept the star brads/embellies & changed the placement (from lined up to scattered)... I am kind of wishing that either the little guys or the red triangles from pp 1 & 2 appeared here again, not necessarily because these pages "need" 'em but simply out of my own selfish desire to see them again! I also like Wendy's suggestion of inking the stars, they do seem a little stark. What a friggin amazing tribute to your schrubby - great job by you BOTH!

November 26, 2007

SHCG: I love that you included all of this ephemera! It will help your scrubby to remember all of his triumph! It's great that the colors carry over from the first two pager. The only thing I would change is the tilt of the information page. I would like it to tilt to the left towards the inside of the two page LO, if that makes sense. It would increase the flow. Great job!

November 24, 2007

SHCG: This rocks!

November 20, 2007

SHCG: Love love this! I too love the detail of the shoeprint, it not only goes perfectly with the theme but is a nice creative touch. The memorblia is a great bonus as you dont see much of that in LO's. Wonderful job here Bren!

November 16, 2007

SHCG: Great idea to do the shoe print! You did a good job making over the bib. Love all the details of the day you added!

November 16, 2007

SHCG: I adore all of the ephemera. You are displaying exactly the perfect pieces. A true scrapbook! I would never guess that the bib was replicated. It looks exactly the same. I wouldn't change one minute detail on the left side. Sorry to be repitious, but.... I love the shoe print on the results too. It is such a subtle, yet absolutely cool touch. I am also digging the eclectic mix of ephemera on the page and its partner. My only suggestion on the right page (and it is so minor), is to mat the brackets and feets with either yellow or white so that they will pop a bit more. They get just a bit lost. Love this and love seeing your stuff, as always! (This is a compilation of the single pages.) :-)

November 15, 2007

SHCG: The shoe print was a wonderful idea. The only thing I can think of here would be to ink the yellow stars. They seem a little too stark and primary here compared to the rest of the colors and the brown shoe print.

November 15, 2007

SHCG: This is certainly a great addition to pages 1&2... Love how you used so much from that day. Also love the authentic shoe print. Great idea!

November 15, 2007

SHCG: Well, pages 3 and 4 are as amazing as 1 and 2! I love the bib that you made and it's cool that you included it! The actual shoe print-awesome idea! I love everything here, but I do have a suggestion :) Make the bracket and the punched feet yellow- is hard to see them in brown, and you can use a little more yellow on the right page to balance the big bib on the left page. Amazing job!

November 15, 2007