Triathlon: Swim-Bike-Run (p. 2)

nice design, like the letters and action icons

May 10, 2008

SHCG - Consider my more comprehensive comments to pp 1 & 2 repeated here. Wonderful to see your outstanding LO in more detail here! I must say, though, that I agree w/ Lisa in that it'd be cool to see just a tiny line of journaling explaining why there's no running in the "running" pics ("We only saw the moments before you started running, as you rounded that corner like a flash!", sumpin like that...). Such super work, dahling.

November 26, 2007

SHCG: Great contintuation of page one. On this one, I really love the triangles that are point to the pages. I also love those little paper cut out people doing the parts of the triathalon. Again, love the continued altered rounded corners and the flow of these two pages.

November 17, 2007

SHCG: I echo my sentiments from the facing page, but am including that I adore your little action icons. They are the perfect addition as embellishments to this page. I love the garnet colored arrows that add so much motion to the page and really complete the theme. Supa-dupa fly.

November 15, 2007

SHCG: Great continuation from page 1. LUV the title letters (some round, some square), and the cut out yellow men are just perfect. Only feedback would be... not a whole lot of running going on in the running pictures. maybe you could handwrite "and a little sitting". But really, I wouldn't change a thing.