SHCG: Hey Marsha! Nice to meet you! Sorry, we haven't officially met yet. :-) I absolutely love this page. She looks incredibly happy and idyllic. Don't you just love that childhood innocence? I love your photo placement and your choice of colors. They are totally fabulous! The only thing that I might suggest and this is reaching.... Is an element between the "e" and the dog... just something to add some weight to that corner and fill that space. I love this and look forward to seeing more from you, sweetheart! *wave*
SHCG: How fun it this. Great layout LUV the blues & browns. just a little suggestion...not sure what the white edge is on the left hand side of the bottom left picture. It might look better if you cropped that white a little.
SHCG: What a beautifully fun LO! I love the colors and the techniques you used on the top picture mixed with the placement of the other pictures. I would name the other children too if possible or explain who they are as years from now someone may ask "Who are the other kids?" But other than that, this is really nice!!!
SHCG: I really like the colors you've used with this! I agree with others about the title font- a blocky one would work better. I'd also switch the colors of the title and the journaling- that would also help the title stand out, IMO. I like the placement of the picutres... I always struggle with putting multiple pics on a page and not having them look busy!
SHCG: I love the effects you used on this page and the colors are fabulous. Also, Janna and the other two look like they are having sooo much fun at the beach. All of the critiques I give are obviously my opinion only, so never be offended by them or feel that you have to listen. Anyway, I would suggest on this one that you stretch the brown "paper" (for lack of a better word with digital) the entire length of the page, rather than adding the blue square and putting the title over that. To me this really breaks up the page. I also think the font is a little hard to read and think maybe a slightly more blocked font would work a little better. And one last suggestion, I would change the color of the name and date font to the same color as the beach dance. The gold does not seem to fit quite as well. I am looking forward to more digital pages from you!
SHCG: Marsha I think the LO is great. I don't know anything about digi, but I do agree with Janet about the title font. The one you have is cute, but is a little hard to read.
SHCG: All right, Marsha! Put on your safety gear, I'm coming in! I have to admit, I'm never really sure how to critique digi pages, but lessee what I can offer ya. I like the wistful effects on the main photo, and your photo placement at the bottom is great. You have a nice, serene, neutral beach and blue color scheme going on here, too. Janna's got a great smile in the main photo. Is there a way to put a glow around her entire body to play off the emotion? As is, she seems to fade into the background. I love how the reflection of her feet bleeds onto the photo block below, and I like the gold circles. However, I'd remove one of them and space them out a little bit. Finally, I think the letters in the title could use some more dimension, like a shadow in a lighter color for each letter. Welcome to our cg, Marsha!
SHCG: Inspired by me? WOW I am flattered! I really like how you did all the photos and altered the colors. One thing I would change however, is the font of the title Beach Dance. I love that font (and have used it for things myself!) but find it difficult to read at times.
SHCG - Ooh, great LO, love the dreamy beachy feel you created w/ the photo effects in the top pic, the blue/neutrals palette & the brush strokes on the background. I adore the assembly of multi-pics at the bottom & the swirly border. Admittedly, I was initially iffy about the circles in the middle on the right side, but they are growing on me, plus they help with overall balance. I would like more details on how this was inspired by our Janet! Fabulous LO, Marsha!
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