Luxury "Suh-Weet" (left)

SHCG: this is really weird I thought I already left you feedback but I don't see it and twice now trying to leave feedback I just got kicked off your page so I will be quick. Great Page LUV the doodling on the photos.

SHCG - (copying pertinent stuff for this side from my overall critiques on the 2 pg spread). Way cool w/ the dual challenge responses on each side of this 2pager! Marvelous title too, to-die-for cool 'n cute. Simply fantastic how you kept up this reverse image yellow/green scheme & conveyed an athletic feel throughout the whole shebang. The photo tinting is a great remedy to the poor lighting you didn't like. I wish I could zoom in to see the textured cardstock but I take your word for it. Awesome so far. Now, going back to that photo tinting, I am wishing the photo tinting shown here continued on the opposite side, because as the yellow/green cardstock scheme reverses from left to right, I kind of feel like the photo tinting will continue its checkerboard as I look left to right & it doesn't. Otherwise, LOVE the double challenge whammy, love the jock-type feel... suh-weet & fabulous LO!!

SHCG: I love the doodling! You did a really great job; it replaces the interest that pp brings. I also really like how you made the page interactive- it's a great way to add more pics to the page. The title is funny too. :)

SHCG: LOVE the writing on the photos! Love the tinting, very creative thinking! I will have to remember that for bad lighting photos! I have to say that I feel its missing something, maybe some slight straightline doodling around the top, left side and bottom. Also, maybe some baseball "stitching" doodles on the letters of the title.

SHCG: Please see my comments on the 2 page spread, but I couldn't resist the opportunity to notice your amazing penwork on the title, on the pictures, and around the pictures. I just love the look of the writing on the walls. Fabulous, babygirl!

SHCG: Great variety of photos.