garden fairy

SHCG: I feel like the little girl just cuts off as the others say. The title IS hard to read, but I do like the whimsical feel to this LO.

July 21, 2008

SHCG: I think this is very pretty and magical. I agree with the other girls about the torso being cut off, but other then that it's great :)

July 18, 2008

SHCG: This is very pretty. I would just like to see the entire swirls on the upper left hand corner and the title is a little hard to read.

July 16, 2008

Pretty!

July 15, 2008

lovely soft color scheme. great job!

July 13, 2008

SHCG: I love the colors and the the whole concept and design. I would move the flower that's on the bird to just slightly overlap the lower part of his body. Just to give the illusion that he is behind it, rather than it being stuck to him.

July 12, 2008

Very pretty....love the wings!

July 12, 2008

This is so pretty!

July 10, 2008

SHCG - Oooh, what a pretty & heavenly page! I love the soft colors...combined w/ all the dreamy images (the flowers, swirls, bird & fairies) you really create such a fantastical, heavenly atmosphere here. I am wondering who is the fairy image in the center - is it a pic of one of your DGD? If so, I would agree w/ Christy's suggestion to take out "& then they are gone" from the quote (if it's not one of your DGD, then disregard). Also, I was thinking what Tiff wrote before I even read her critique, the fairy's torso seems cut off abruptly...perhaps insert a swirl/cloud/flowers, or a faded body, to conceal where her torso ends. Overall, this is absolutely gorgeous... I wanna be transported to this garden!!

July 07, 2008

SHCG: Love the fantasy element you have working here. I love the wings that you used here. Beautiful. My two suggestions are to either find a way to extend the length of her body or place an element ther for it to "disappear" behind and I want the quote to be less boxy. I'd like to see it in a scroll type fashion. Something whimsical to match the feel of the layout. It is pretty and definitely fairy-licious!

July 06, 2008

SHCG: I love the fairy dreamland feel to this page, all the layers, and great digi work. I have a few suggestions and critiques. I'd like to see what the banner looks like in creme with gold borders. Also, there needs to be a comma between dawn and bless. Lovely phrase, btw. The fairy is cute, but it draws my attention from the focal fairy, so I'd go with Jesse's suggestion. I like the bright pink flower on the far right, just above the fairy's right wing, as well; but, it needs to be anchored to something. Maybe more flourishes between it and the flower underneath it. Fun fairy page, Marsha!

July 06, 2008

Spectacular! I've been trying to put fairy wings on my gd ... no luck! Beautiful! Didn't see this on the front page!

July 06, 2008

This is a great layout. I love the uniqueness of it!

July 06, 2008

SHCG: Digital lo's amaze me- you've added so many different dimensions here! The only thing that is sticking out to me is that the fairy next to the bird is very detailed while the other elements (the bird and scrolls) are more artistic.... I really can't decide if the fairy just doesn't fit or it's a nice contrast. Maybe try and swap in a fairy more like the bird and see if it seems more appropriate? I really like the concept of the page!

July 05, 2008

SHCG: So pretty! I am amazed at all the elements you include - they are great! I would suggest changing the color of the quote/title strip though, as it fades into the page too much for me.

July 04, 2008

SHCG: Beautiful elements to this LO. I know this may sound strange, but I would remove the "and then they are gone" from the wording on this lo, other than that, pretty lo!