SHCG: Marsha, I think the journaling is appropriate, and it lends itself to remembering the day. I would like the date a little smaller and off center from the photo a bit.
SHCG: Marsha, you were concerned about the tact of your journaling, and I honestly don't think you have anything to worry about. This was your observation, and this is real. Besides, this is your page, your memory. I like the monochromatic color scheme and the lace frame. The flower arrangement jumped out at me, not because of it's bright colors, but moreso because it screamed funeral arrangement, and came across as a such a stark contrast to Janna's pretty smile. That said, I don't have a better suggestion, and I do like that there is a piece in that corner.
SHCG: This is great that you journaled about this event. Love the colors and how they match your dgd outfit. I agree with Sharon about the flowers being a different color to match the other colors. I would also add dashes/slashes between the date :)
SHCG: Love the journaling (mispelling in next to last line: thr=the). Great colors. I hope this would be placed to the one of your other DGD. I do wish you'd use the same colored flowers from the other LO on this one.
SHCG - Marsha, I love how candid the journaling is on this & I'm very grateful you captured this. Like I said in my comments to your earlier LO w/ your other DGD, the contrast between your DGDs' smiling loveliness & innocent misunderstanding of the situation, against the sadness of the solemn event, is compelling. A moving testament to childhood innocence. I do think that design-wise, I'd prefer if the reds in the flowers/ribbons, were more pink/purple/fuschia, to be more harmonious w/ the rest the LO & your DGD's clothes (would prefer if all the colors in that flower-graphic were cooler-toned for overall consistency w/ the whole page). Also, would wish there was a period at the end of your journaling. Beautiful LO. TFS!
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