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I love it...it's very nice
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I love your page! Again, the way you positioned your stars and stripes was ingenious! And the flow of the page from top to bottom was great.
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I like the composition. The flow of the paper from the top of the page through to the bottom flag paper. It makes the eye move right to your central photo. I agree with the others that the lettering is hard to read and needs to be larger or clearer. Good work.
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I really like the embellishments you put on here! Love the torn paper. The title is a little hard to read, but maybe it's just the picture??
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I really like the overall look of this, the paper tearing is awesome and so is the inking. I think I agree with Cath about adding some red or blue paper -- especially as matting to the picture -- I think it will really those wonderful soliders stand out :) I love the America tag -- so cute. :)
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ooh WOW love this! You did a great job! It is really hard to see the word on the flag, if it is that ard to see them irl you may think about moving them.
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Wow this is so great! Love the distressing you did on the papers. I would suggest putting the words under the date on some torn paper, to make them stand out more. Really great job on the inking on the crumpled paper!
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The way you positioned the stars and stripes paper really go well with the flag in the picture. I might add a frame or matting around the words under June 04 to make them stand out.The torn edges on all the paper really give it a nice touch.
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Ok first let me say WOW..I love the stripes and the upper stars paper the way you positioned them..again I love the idea of double matting the photo to give it more of a presence on the page.. I also love the hanging embellis and would prob mat the i love America tab.. the backround works really well, but I wonder what deep red or true blue would do for your work? just a thought tfs
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