SHCG: Love how you Stickled around the buttons on the flowers- adds just the right amount of sparkle! Your arrangement of photos & pp is great. I do think that the bg paper is too bright though.
GDCG: The layout is really cute, i love the pp's you've used. As far as critiques go though I think that the background is a little bit overpowering and it takes away from the photos...a softer yellow would really make the pictures pop.
GDCG: I am pretty sure I have commented on this one before, because it's in my faves LOL. it's hard to critique this one, because I absolutely adore it!
GDCG: Leaving another comment on for critique: I think the bg color could have been softer and like the other said the pink mats could be inked. Other than that its SUPER CUTE!
SHCG: Great use of colors! Adorable pictures. Love the buttons around the journaling. I would consider inking the sides of the pink mats as well, I felt,especially the bottom left side, could have benefited from inking as you did on the top mats.
This is absolutely precious!!! I love the way you have the buttons surrounding your journaling circle! Your dd is just darling!! They are so cute at that age!
(GDCG)comment: love the yellow and colors together critique; the pic at the top left could have a slightly smaller mat and then some flourishes all around would really look nice
SHCG - So very CUTE! Great sketch & button use - nice response to those challenges. I ADORE the photos & the upbeat, playful colors/pp you use. Wonderful how you created a visual triangle w/ your flower placement. I like how you accented the title letters too. I would add the date handwritten in tiny numbers somewhere (or, on the back if you prefer). I could also visualize inking the 2 bottom pics as the pp rectangles are inked. Terrific work on this page, Becky!!
SHCG: Ahhh the title says it all! Love the buttons, the design and the flowers. The only thing I would suggest is making the title bigger, to me it looks smaller then the journaling circle. Great LO :)
shcg: You're right! This IS cute! I'd love to see brads or twine (or similiar) put through the holes of the buttons... Oh, even puff paint! to ground them a bit more, especially around the pink circle. I also wish that you'd continued with your inking around the pink photo mats as well. I'd also add a date so I knew which birthday this was following.
(critique group) The only thing I see you could change/add is to make the two pink mats a little wider and tie some thread in the buttons. It would be the perfect finnishing touch.
SHCG: Perfect title for this page! I like the dots on each letter and how your flowers provide a visual triangle. I also like the glitter around the button flower centers. The buttons make for a cute journaling frame. I'd like to see some sort of fiber connecting the buttons or even glitter to keep with what you've already incorporated. I might've gone with green for the journaling text, just to play up some of the green that's in the polka dot pp, and I'd probably add 1st between her and birthday. I can tell she loved her goodies!
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