Great Adventure

GDCG: The title looks great! I think maybe some doodling around the pictures will help to bring them out a little more.

September 17, 2009

GDCG: I adore how you did the title curve! The pictures are great as well. I think some journaling around the circles would be really cute!

September 16, 2009

Love the caterpillars and butterflys

September 15, 2009

cute little bugs! love the cropping

September 12, 2009

GDCG: love the progression pictures!! I completely agree with April-its a great idea to mat the pictures in a the shape of a slope!

September 10, 2009

April, yeah, I thought about doing a slope in the background. :)

September 06, 2009

love the way your eyes follow him down the hill

September 06, 2009

(GDCG)comment: I like the swirly title critique; how about some patterned paper or cardstock underneath shaped like a ski slope?

September 05, 2009

that looks like so much fun, I like the photo sequence =D

September 04, 2009

(GDCG) Love the photo placement! Very Fun!

September 04, 2009

Love the title and how you placed the photos!! Cool page!

September 04, 2009

love the way you have the picts showing him go down the slide

September 04, 2009

Love the way the photos make you feel like you're watching him all the way down the hill.

September 04, 2009

very cute! Love the curve of the title!

September 03, 2009

haha cool pictures!

September 03, 2009

Awesome letters and embellies!

September 03, 2009

I like how the photos and the title cascade down the page, fitting with the topic. I also like how you emphasised the big photo with the interesting matting

September 03, 2009

You sure did capture the fun of this day!

September 03, 2009

Critique Group: Very cute! Love the progression. The way you've placed the photos really mirrors his decent down the hill.

September 03, 2009

love the titling

September 03, 2009

great title work! love the colors in the pictures!

September 03, 2009

Love the little circles of photos and how it looks like one continuous slide!

September 03, 2009

(critique group) creative placement of the title, looks like fun!

September 02, 2009

(critique group) love the way you lined up the pics and the title!

September 02, 2009

CG: I really like the way this looks. The only suggestion I can think of is to take a piece of green CS and tear it at an angle down the page so the botton right triangle of the page is green and it looks like a slope to put the photos on.