this is a work in progress and in for critique group

GDCG: this is one of my favorites from you. love the colors and layering. only suggestion for the l is to use a foam dot.

October 16, 2009

G.D.C.G. Fabulous!

October 15, 2009

GDCG! Maybe you could make it a l with the little end L. Then it wouldn't look like an exclamation mark! BTW, I love the layout and the papers!

October 12, 2009

GDCG:I think Cassie has the solution. I was going to say to put some paper behind it and trim around it to make the letter bigger and stand out.

October 11, 2009

GDCG: Other than your letter issue this is an awesome lo. I like all the elements.

October 10, 2009

GDCG: Is that how you spell it. I think it is naturale rather than naturel. Fixing the spelling I think would fix the problem. Do you have another a? Swap the a for the e and then add the e to the end and presto!

October 10, 2009

GDCG: -- I agree, maybe you could ink the last letter. BUt I read it as natural before reading your description.

October 10, 2009

GDCG: Can you ink it so it is the color of one of the other letters?

October 09, 2009

Cheers