Great colors and great photos! I think I would place the Sheer bliss in between the two photos of you - since it is the perfect phrase for funnel-cake enjoyment.
Cool! Love funnel cakes too.
I thot the colors are really great. My only suggestions is to move the lower journaling up and then the "Sheer Bliss" title down on the left corner.
OOHHH...funnel cakes...looks yummy! If you're really thinking of changing the journaling, how about trying to do them in strips? And then maybe move the "sheer bliss" tag to underneath the b/w photo so that it partially hides some of the string. I love the picture of you digging in to the funnel cake!
I don't really like how the journaling ended up broken up by the "Sheer Bliss" tag. I'll probably end up rewriting it anyway, since I'm not so happy with how I phrased it.
Journaling: The Boardwalk's biggest attraction is the Giant Dipper, and its ride shows its old, wooden nature. Every time we took a curve, the whole coaster shook until I thought we'd fall off! I spent the entire ride with my head down, screaming proportionally to our angular velocity. But I still thought it was pretty fun. Joseph assures me that modern coasters are actually much smoother, and I'll be able to handle them fine. He'll make a coaster enthusiast out of me yet.
Afterwards, I insisted on proper rollercoaster food: funnel cakes! I had the option of a plastic fork, but I figured it was a losing battle anyway. There was powdered sugar EVERYWHERE: on me, on Joseph, on the car, and a train behind us wherever we went.
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