SHCG: Nice arrangement. :) I really like how you included the ticket stub on the page too. I think the page needs more black to tie in with all the black on the photos; maybe a faux black stitch around the whole page or some black embellies?
SHCG: I love the layering on this LO. Great use of color. The title is awesome and I love how you journaled. I do think the two pics should be switched as Joey is looking off the page. I like the placement overall and think it would be too heavy if both pics were on one side. I am happy to see you used a ticket stub. Very cute LO.
SHCG: I really like all the lines in the journaling strip, ledger pp, and notebook pp. I'm with Sharon and Amms on their suggestions, I think it's because the page is too neutral. However, I'm not with the ladies on placement. The page looks like it's split in half which is making me feel like I have to choose between focusing on either the right or left. I'd reconsider how to place your pics to fit more in line with the rule of thirds. I think it's also because Joey and his dad are facing off the page. Otherwise, I really like what the blues and oranges bring to the page, and I like the white alphas and numbers.
SHCG - Cool placement of elements, fantastic pics (of course love the Joey one). Groovy how you used the ticket stub. More great handwritten journaling. I'd like to see more dark elements that echo the darkness in the photos, maybe through some inking of the pp layers & title letters. Maybe even a dark paper circle by the title (which would be reminiscent of a tire), or a line of small dark hole punches somewhere.
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