Paris

this is just AWESOME! :D

June 05, 2006

Beautiful lo!

May 20, 2006

I really love the tags and the ribbon across the bottom. Paper choices are perfect! I agree that the title looks a little bit dark compared to the rest of the page, but otherwise this is perfect!

May 16, 2006

thank you all for your ideas! you all have great ideas.. I just don't like the title-it seems to big. I kind of rushed to put it together for a time challenge for the contest I am in and the title just happened to have been on another LO I was recreating...

May 10, 2006

You know, I think that it's the shape of the title. the pics of the tower are so great, and the title is kind of cutting off the line of the tower in the pics. What if you put the title on it's side running up the left side of the page and move those embellies on the lft to the top and the right. love the paper choices, and the embellies.

May 09, 2006

Love the lo! Maybe a more gold/brown for the title to blend with the BEAUTIFUL pp? And, oh yes, that perspective of the Eiffel Tower is a stunning pic.

May 09, 2006

I really love everything except the title - I think I would adjust the color, like you said in your critique group post. The title is so dark that it is the focus of the page..... maybe if the background behind the word were transparent? That is a big, dark shape. Maybe that element is meant for a different layout? I have to say that I think everything else is stunning. Melanie