I love the painting on the picture the most. This is a great page and very original. I kinda like the "floating" title. It goes with the new freestyle craze! :) Way to use your extra letter stuff too. That parentheses is awesome and what aunt could not oggle that face!
What a cutie pie! I like what you've started here. For me, the sizing of the title elements is what's not quite clicking. I think the "I" compared to the other elements is dark and has a lot of weight on the page. You could balance it out by making some of the other title elements bigger or bolder. You could use a right angle type arrow after "face" pointing up to him...and /or a good sized heart in place of LOVE. The word "that" could be a bit larger, IMO. I like the mixed fonts you used for the word face. I love the distressing you did around the picture too. You're off to a great start here, especially with such a great subject!
Love the photo and what you started here.... Absolutely love the stitches...I think similar to what Marli mentioned....the title is kinda floating? and doesn't end at the page. I sould take a strip of cardstock almost 12 inches long and about 3 inches in width.....in a dark brown...like the "I" or the dark brown on the patterned paper and try to mount it under the parentheses, the f a c e and all the way to the edge.......not sure how much adhered the letters are and the stitching..... it'll pull your eye across and the title will be more grounded......hope this helps! I love the photo and the painting around it!!!
I think its great too! It's hard to scrap with such large pictures sometimes. I agree with what has already been sais about continuing to the right of the page to balance it out a little. Otherwise I like it! That IS an adorable face.. what a cutie!
adorable! I don't think I would change anything. The only suggestion i have is...how do I word it...continue the title around the bottom of the photo for instance you could use dots or an arrow or something...so that "face . . . " goes to the edge of the page. I think it may look more complete.
JMHO! LOOKS GREAT!
I think its cute. It may be a little out of your regular stlye but thats ok. If I was going to change something I would change the I to a smaller, less heavy one.
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