CHT: I'm with Dashe. And scrapz had a great suggestion about making the last photo larger. I think this lo would be more interesting if you told the story. Maybe you could have your dh tell the story - did the earth shake? How loud was the explosion? Did they blow something up? How powerful can those things be? I like the purple color you picked. If you rework this, please post it so we can praise it all over again!
How about start at the top in the middle with a small circle, then larger with each photo, then moving to the left and down and then around, making the last one the largest. Does that make sense?
CHT: Im with Dashe, there in no focus point and the page elements are too evenly distributed. Id make one pic larger: reprint or use a good size mat(I like the fourth pic for this). For the tile, Id use maybe a shorter word ("KABOOM"?) and Demolition Day in a smaler font, as a subtitle... Make the arrows bigger? Im ok with the CS and like the PP very much.
CHT: I like the idea of the arrows going all the way around. Circles are cool, too. One thing when I look at this page is that I don't know where to look first. All the photos are the same size, and I'm not even sure which part of the title to look at first. Also, in general I like the PPs, but maybe look at something less cute, and a little more masculine? Hope that helps!
I have been trying to get all of DH's pics from his time in the Middle east together into one album. So far the album has turned out as all BG. This is one showing the demo of extra ammo
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