It is beautiful. I also, didn't see her name right away. I think it would look nice against a dart background or with some doodling around it. Maybe you could scan or photocopy it and practice before you alter the real thing.
Hi Shel,
This is very cool--what a lot of work! I don't think it is that hard to read. I do like the idea of the thin black pen outline--BUT, I do think it is risky. If it were me, I would leave it alone and be proud of it! What photo are you using for it? Can't wait to see your finished page!
My personal opinion is that you should leave it as is! I think it is beautiful! I did not read it at first but after I looked at it for a moment I was able to see it clearly! If you wantto change anything, you could exchange the blue flower in the "L" at the bottom loop, you know, the one with the button! I would put a smaller one to make a more defined loop. HTH!!
So, I came up with this idea for a great title for a layout about my daughter, Lily. I wrote her name in script and covered it with flowers. The problem is, it is really difficult to read. My ideas for solving the problem are not great, but here's what I was thinking:
1. I could outline the script with dots in black markers of different thicknesses.I'm afraid this will make it look too busy.
2. I could outline it in a single black line, like a doodle, but I think it might make it look sloppy.
3. I could cut it out from the yellow cardstock, leaving a border and adhere it to a black or dark colored cardstock, but again, sloppiness concerns me.
4. I could leave it as is and hope that people can read it, since the journaling will explain it.
Any and all criticism, advice, help would be appreciated. Thanks.
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