I think I agree with K about the title's size, but I think you might be able to offset the overwhelming feeling by alternating the colors of the letters from red to hot pink. On the right page, I think your pic could use doodling in black pen. Maybe start with the black lines at the top of the page and continue them into the picture, at varying lengths, with hearts (that look like the bigger ones) dangling from them. I think it'd be cute, too, if one of the hearts had wings. Also, I'd fill in the hearts with red.
I love the doodled look on the 2nd page. I would add some of the same photo corners here to add some elements of repition. I would also write in with a journaling pen in cursive the word perfect. I think having both words in the same large title is a little overwhelming and it takes over that great photo.
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