The new additions take this right over the top Angela! The additional red in that bottom right corner and the mats completely fixed your "flow" and now my eye moves across the whole page. Love what you did with our "wish"... you went from a B+ to an AAAA++++ with this one!
I think this is a great improvement! Just adding the extra color in the doodles really brings more things to the eye. LOVE the little charachters in the upper right corner too!
Yes, yes, yes, yes, YES! I thought your first one was cute, but this one is even better. It's amazing what a few simple additions can do to the personality of the page. Defining the red here and there, the new doodles, the mats... I love the new treatment of the title, and (gasp) those stars--the way you made them flow into the black like that. (Insert me kissing the tips of my fingers.) Finito! Brava!
This is my updated version of my Scrap Happenzz Challenge #9. The suggestions & my original can be seen at http://www.scrapbook.com/galleries/143085/view/711765/-1/0/1.html Note that the white pen doodling inside "wish" is not showing up as intense here as it is on my original--can't get it do that for me). I "cheated" a bit with the red mattes but I hope they work & make the l/o better!
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