you take amazing photos - i didnt see the first layout - but i love the orange "sunset" and the water effect here!!! Max was certainly having a fun day! (love the toes in sand pic!!)
I didn't mind the orange myself because I saw it as representative of a beautiful beach sunset or the bright fabrics you see at beach-side. *But* I *love* the blue and think the title is more vibrant now. What is a real improvement on this one is the journaling because most of the time better chosen but fewer words are stronger.
Thanks to some feedback from my critique group I decided to revise this layout. I agreed that the orange was too intense. I also decided to alter the shape to emulate a more "watery feel" and simplified the journaling slightly. I like this version much better. Hope you like it too.
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