Y is for Yoda

I agree about the title and "Y". It's a matter of having a focal point---everything in this layout has equal weight. I'd probably center the main photo,(a mat to match those tights would make the photo pop even more, and I think that paisly paper could hold up to that) make a big Y and title across top and then line up the 2 photos and journaling at bottom, centering the rectangle photo under the main photo. Grandma Sam

October 06, 2006

I like everything except the title. I does need to be bigger, especially the 'Y'

October 05, 2006

CHT: I agree with Pink about the title. Right now, the Y looks kind of random -- it's not obvious that "Y is for Yoda." I love the PP, too, and I like how you matted the upper-left photo a little off-center.

October 04, 2006

CHT: The journaling is so cute and it is hard to find something to match the Y. I would suggest making the "y" and the "Yoda" more prominent on the page. They both get lost in the other elements. I would suggest straightening the photo in the middle to please the eye and moving the Y up to the top with the Yoda title. You could move the three circles to the bottom of the large circle they're associated with now. What pp did you choose? I love that design. Great work!

October 04, 2006

Cheers

Y is for Yoda

More Inspiration

Cheers

Y is for Yoda

More Projects by Phoenix R

More Inspiration

Report this project as inappropriate.

Cheer sent!