I really like how you fillied the middle of the flower with buttons. The colours are great and I really like the tag and ribbons. However my eyes is drawn to the tags blank space. I dont know wether thats because you pulled it out but if not i would be tempted to make the tag shorter. As the tag competes with the photo I would be tempted to double mat the photo.
How fun is this page?? Great job! I beleive it could use some inking, and the blank space on the tag (between the writing on it and the ribbons) is bothersome. My eye goes directly there at first. Maybe shortening the space between the text and ribbon or do something decorative there to fill the space. Great photo!
I love the colors combined with the black & white photo! Again, love those ribbons. The only thing i would do is ink the sides of the tag slightly to help it pop. Maybe in a pink or blue that matches the other PP. Beautiful job here!
Very very fun and playful! I love the bright red with the oranges and yellows. It's a lot of fun. The buttons in the middle of the flower gives a fun feel to this layout! The ribbon works well too. I would like to see more of a title, or a story here other than a large monogram. I am a huge journaler so I would like to see it on the page rather than hidden :)
Very pretty page - love the pp & colors! I like the idea of inking the outside in red, to tie this all together. I also agree that more attention should be drawn to the hidden journaling, so I vote for red inking around that card as well.
This is beautiful! I really love these patterned papers together. I happen to have a crush on Basic Grey! I love your composition here. The torn corner of the paper really draws my eye right to the photo. I feel that the tag needs to be tucked further down or the envelope needs to be larger. I can only read two words on the journaling and it is a little distracting to me. I am soooooo in love with the buttons at the center of your flower. That rocks! I would either mat the tiny brackets or ink them so they will pop against the background paper. This is beautiful and something for your niece to treasure!
I am liking your PP choices here and the overall color scheme... Great job. The one change I do have in mind is with your journaling card... The fact that it sticks out above the pocket to me makes it an important part of the design. Becuase of that I feel it should be more defined. Maybe ink the edges or create a decorative border around it.
love the colors here! The photo is great and I like the flowers that you put on top of it! I think all the elements here are kind of just competing -big flower, big pocket, big monogram and the photo is kind of lost. If you can't print the photo bigger ,you can use a blue mat under the red and you can then put the photo to the left. Use the photo as a journaling pocket. use the monogram in the middle of the flower and put the flower where the title is not. Mat the title with red and then blue and put it right above the flower. I would love to see where you go with this one!
I've always liked those pps, so I'm pleased to see them in another lo. I like the eyelets in the n, and the picture is very sweet with the added touches of the little transparent flower stickers. I also like the buttons as a center for the red flower. I have to say that my eyes don't stop and focus on one thing in particular. Maybe, it's because there's so much red, and I do think that flower overpowers the photo in size. My main suggestion, other than repositioning, would then have to be to play around with less bold colors, that you pick up from the pp, for the mat and journaling pocket. Four more things I noted: 1) it's difficult to see the blue brackets in the Lilfe is Sweet sticker placed over the blue cs; 2) the pattern and texture of the two center ribbons on the journaling tag don't seem to fit with the page; 3) the tearing of the pp just under the photo seems out of place with all the smooth lines of the rest of the page; and 4) though I like the buttons, I wouldn't have gone with a dark red in the very center because it gets lost in the flower's already dark color.
I think I would like to see the chipboard "n" straightened out. I love this pp and the red was a nice touch. I could see the edges of the red cs inked in black.. and the blue cs inked as well. I'd like to see that picture moved up and everything scooted to the left a little and that flower brought down to the bottom right of the photo.
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