Music Makes Us Dance

Cheers

I really like Tiff's suggestions here...to end the title & sentiment with "dance". I personally think "dance" should be in a different, larger, really fun font...something that makes me want to jump out of my chair and get down right here, right now! I also think Brenda's nailed the photo placement suggestion. With her placement tips, Tiff's other idea & your personal spin on both, I think your layout will rock my socks off!

May 20, 2007

Rather than make a whole bunch of suggestions, I'll focus on photo placement, because I think that's where you need to start with this one if you're not too attached to its current composition. Try putting the two skinny pics on either end flush against each other and then on top of that medium sized one. Then put that trio to the left of the big pic so that they all form one block in a single yellow mat. Start with that. See if you get any ideas from there that help you decide what to do with the other components of your page. Another idea is to still place the photos in the way I suggested, but have three mats--one for the two skinny pics, one for the medium, one for the big. Form a block that way, but now you'll have the blue cs showing through between the three mats. Hope this helps.

May 17, 2007

Oh yeah, Mel. I remember the first LO. For some reason, this LO evokes a strong opinion out of me. Going to try to make my suggestions fairly systematic. Ok... I would move the dance from the top and set it aside for now. Move what's left of the top title over so that it is justified right. Then, move the first picture up a smidge, the next one down a smidge. The third one down a bigger smidge and the last one down a bit more. I'm seeing the first picture and the last picture equi-distance from the top and bottom, respectively. After that, take the laugh, live and love and put one word on top of each picture. Not right on top, leave a little space. Finally put the dance in the open spot at the bottom next to the circles, but it needs something to make it stand out. A stronger mat, an arrow pointing to it. Something. the title would read Music makes us laugh, live, love.... DANCE. I really like the whole concept behind this LO. I'm glad that you are sticking with it. Great job, Mel.

May 01, 2007

I agree w/ Denitza, I'd like to see "dance" move down a bit to fill in all that space. Some doodling might be fun too. Love these bold colors & fun photos!

May 01, 2007

I am also thinking doodling would be great, not a whole lot, but a little here and there would give this LO a finishing touch. What a fun LO!

April 30, 2007

I see large cirlces of that patterned paper behind the photos!

April 30, 2007

I can see " dance" coming down a little bit and I think that will be enough.. Love the colors! The photos are great!

April 30, 2007

I really don't see you adding much to it that wouldn't take away from the photos. Maybe you could doodle on the right side above the pics, but other than that I really don't think it needs anything.

April 29, 2007

Cheers

Music Makes Us Dance

More Projects by Cajaya

More Inspiration

Report this project as inappropriate.

Cheer sent!